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Updated my landing page.  What are your honest thoughts?Updated my landing page. What are your honest thoughts? Thanks everyone  
http://www.homeshieldpm.com/Downtow...43HIM
Updated my landing page.  What are your honest thoughts?

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I feel like I'm gonna have to enter my email to download your latest eBook that tells me how to run my own eBay business selling items I find at yard sales.  
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@torn95 haha that bad. crap! Too much going on?  
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Nah. I'm just painting a visual. Honestly, give yourself a huge pat on the back for even making it. 99% of people don't even get that far. What about just a simple pop up like this site for example?  
https://www.rpmchicagoedge.com/
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I really like the drop down on that page too. That may be cool to utilize something like that.  
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@torn95 i like this too. Going to dry to dumb it down
+10 votes
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Good aspects for covering information/content. Design looks amateurish. and not well polished
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@underprivileged1 think i might get someone to clean it up
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@significative what platform are you using?  
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Using wordpress but I have an editor built in my website guy used.  
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