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Landing page gurus.  I need your help!Landing page gurus. I need your help! I am about to start launching some adwords campaigns for my property management business. I built this landing page myself on my wordpress site. What am I missing? I know it probably a bit too busy and the graphics arent all that great. Please provide constructive criticism.  
http://www.homeshieldpm.com/downtow..._0mwA
Landing page gurus.  I need your help!

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How about Free Setup ($350 value)? I think that would read a little easier.  
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Your video overlaps your text on desktop.  
+3 votes
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Scales well for mobile. I think it is a good landing page.  
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You have competing goals. If your hook is a free rental property analysis report, then make that the emphasis, your one CTA. Then, either present the management service on the thank you page or as part of a pitch when you give them the report (probably better). The way it's set up now could confuse them. You talk about filling out the form for the report, then immediately talk about fees. That will likely stop them in their tracks wondering if they are committing to something.  
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Make the phone number bigger, change the "contact us" to something more relating to your business like "Request a Free Quote. " Add authoritative logos towards the top like anything you've been seen on.  
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The guarantees are nice, but maybe change that to "why choose us", you're directly speaking to someones fears/concerns.  
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